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6	Bm ×2	6	Bm ×2
7		7
8	[Куплет]:/X. RESTRAINT/	8	[Куплет]: /X. RESTRAINT/
9	Bm	9	Bm
10	Freedom (Calls my name)	10	Freedom (Calls my name)
11	C#7	11	C#
12	Serenity (Keeps me sane)	12	Serenity (Keeps me sane)
13	F#7 Bm	13	A#dim Bm
14	Happiness (It dulls the pain)	14	Happiness (It dulls the pain)
		15	Bm
15	Honest (To see my place)	16	Honest (To see my place)
16	G~~maj7~~	17	G
17	Open (To other ways)	18	Open (To other ways)
18	C B	19	C B

21	Bm	22	Bm
22	Justice (But do not judge)	23	Justice (But do not judge)
23	C#7	24	C#
24	Courtesy (For others' flaws)	25	Courtesy (For others' flaws)
25	F#7 Bm	26	A#dim Bm
26	Kindness (It's not that hard)	27	Kindness (It's not that hard)
		28	Bm
27	Self-restraint (Of tongue and pen)	29	Self-restraint (Of tongue and pen)
28	G~~maj7~~	30	G
29	Inventory (My daily friend)	31	Inventory (My daily friend)
30	C B	32	C B

42		44
43	[Припев]:	45	[Припев]:
44	Bm Gdim7 F#dim7 Em Fdim7 ~~G#dim7~~	46	Bm A#dim7 D#dim7 Em Fdim7
45	Fateful as----cent	47	Fateful as----cent
46	Bm Gdim7 F#dim7 G A	48	Bm Fdim7 A#dim7 G A
47	Through dark--est fires	49	Through dark---est fires
48	Dm Edim7 F#dim7 Gm G#dim7	50	Dm A#dim7 D#dim7 Gm Fdim7
49	I've found the path	51	I've found the path
50	Dm Edim7 F#dim7 Bb ~~Bdim7~~ C	52	Dm Fdim7 A#dim7 A# C
51	To take me higher	53	To take me higher
52		54
53	[Проигрыш]:	55	[Проигрыш]:
54	Bm \| Bm /Cm/ ×4	56	Bm \| Bm /Cdim/ ×4
55		57
56	[Куплет]:	58	[Куплет]:
57	Bm	59	Bm
58	You're smart enough	60	You're smart enough
59	C#7	61	C#
60	For me to trust	62	For me to trust
61	F#7 Bm	63	A#dim Bm
62	Go live your life now	64	Go live your life now
		65	Bm
63	Just keep these steps	66	Just keep these steps
64	G~~maj7~~	67	G
65	In your life	68	In your life
66	C B	69	C B
67	And you'll know how	70	And you'll know how
68		71
69	Bm	72	Bm
70	If you're not sure,	73	If you're not sure,
71	C#7	74	C#
72	ask yourself:	75	ask yourself:
73	F#7 Bm	76	A#dim Bm
74	"Have I done to them	77	"Have I done to them
		78	Bm
75	as I would	79	as I would
76	G~~maj7~~	80	G
77	have them	81	have them
78	C B	82	C B
79	do to me?"	83	do to me?"
80		84
81	[Пред-припев]:	85	[Пред-припев]:

90		94
91	[Припев]:	95	[Припев]:
92	Bm Gdim7 F#dim7 Em Fdim7 ~~G#dim7~~	96	Bm A#dim7 D#dim7 Em Fdim7
93	Fateful as----cent	97	Fateful as----cent
94	Bm Gdim7 F#dim7 G A	98	Bm Fdim7 A#dim7 G A
95	Through dark--est fires	99	Through dark---est fires
96	Dm Edim7 F#dim7 Gm G#dim7	100	Dm A#dim7 D#dim7 Gm Fdim7
97	I've found the path	101	I've found the path
98	Dm Edim7 F#dim7 Bb C	102	Dm Fdim7 A#dim7 A# C
99	To take me higher	103	To take me higher
100		104
101	[Бридж 1]:	105	[Бридж 1]:

106	C#7 G	110	C#7 G
107	Sometimes you've got to be wrong	111	Sometimes you've got to be wrong
108	And learn from mistakes	112	G
		113
		114	And learn from mistakes
109	C#7 Em	115	C#7 Em
110	I live with serenity now	116	I live with serenity now
111	Not self-righteous hate	117	Em
		118	Not self-righteous hate
112		119
113	[Клавишное соло]:/XI. RECEIVE/	120	[Клавишное соло]: /XI. RECEIVE/
114	Bm /~~A~~/ ×4	121	Bm // Bm //// E ///
115	E7 ×4	122	Bm //// E /// Bm ///
116		123
117	[Брейкдаун]:	124	[Брейкдаун]:
118	Em \| C#dim \| C \| F#7	125	Em \| C#m7-5 \| Cmaj7 \| F#m7-5
119	Em \| C#dim \| C \| Am	126	Em \| C#m7-5 \| Cmaj7 \| Am
120	Em C#dim	127
		128	Em
121	(Help me be a channel of Thy peace.)	129	(Help me be a channel of Thy peace.)
122	C	130	C#m7-5 Cmaj7
123	(That where there is hatred, I may bring love.)	131	(That where there is hatred, I may bring love.)
124	F#7	132	F#m7-5
125	(That where there is wrong, I may bring the spirit of forgiveness.)	133	(That where there is wrong, I may bring the spirit of forgiveness.)
126	Em C#dim	134	Em C#m7-5
127	(That where there is discord, I may bring harmony.)	135	(That where there is discord, I may bring harmony.)
128	C	136	Cmaj7
129	(That where there is error, I may bring truth.)	137	(That where there is error, I may bring truth.)
130	Am	138	Am
131	(That where there is doubt, I may bring faith.)	139	(That where there is doubt, I may bring faith.)
132		140
133	Em C#dim C	141	Em C#m7-5 Cmaj7
134	Now that you can see all you have done	142	Now that you can see all you have done
135	F#7	143	Cmaj7
136	(That where there is despair, I may bring hope.)	144	(That where there is despair, I may bring hope.)
137	(That where there is shadow, I may bring light.)	145	F#m7-5
138	Em C#dim C	146	(That where there is shadow, I may bring light.)
		147	Em C#m7-5 Cmaj7
139	It's time to take that step into the kingdom	148	It's time to take that step into the kingdom
140	Am	149	F#m7-5
141	(That where there is sadness, I may bring joy.)	150	(That where there is sadness, I may bring joy.)
142	Em C#dim C	151	Em C#m7-5 Cmaj7
143	All your sins will help to make your strong	152	All your sins will help to make your strong
		153	Cmaj7
144	(That I may seek rather to comfort, than to be comforted.)	154	(That I may seek rather to comfort, than to be comforted.)
145	F#7	155	F#m7-5
146	(That I may seek to understand, rather than to be understood.)	156	(That I may seek to understand, rather than to be understood.)
147	Em C#dim C	157	Em C#m7-5 Cmaj7
148	And help you break right through the prison wall	158	And help you break right through the prison wall
149	Am	159	Asus2
150	(That I may seek to love, rather than to be loved.)	160	(That I may seek to love, rather than to be loved.)
		161	Am
151	(For it is by self-forgetting that one finds.)	162	(For it is by self-forgetting that one finds.)
152	(It is by forgiving that one is forgiven.)	163	Am
		164	(It is by forgiving that one is forgiven.)
153		165
154	[Бридж 2]:	166	[Бридж 2]:
155	Bbm Ab	167	A#m G#
156	Keep all of me	168	Keep all of me
157	Cm Fm Eb Db	169	Cm Fm D# C#
158	The desires that once burned me deep inside	170	The desires that once burned me deep inside
159	Bbm	171	A#m
160	Help me live today	172	Help me live today
161	G	173	Gm7-5
162	And help to give me grace	174	And help to give me grace
163	Gb	175	F#
164	To carry out your way	176	To carry out your way
165		177
166	Bbm Fm	178	A#m Fm
167	I am ready	179	I am ready
168	Fdim C	180	Fdim7 Csus4 C
169	Help me be all I can be	181	Help me be all I can be
170	Bbm F	182	A#m F
171	I am ready	183	I am ready
172	Ddim7 Db C	184	Fdim7 C#7 Csus4 C
173	Help guide me and keep me free	185	Help guide me and keep me free
174		186
175	[Проигрыш]:/XII. RESPONSIBLE/	187	[Проигрыш]: /XII. RESPONSIBLE/
176	Fm ~~Ab Fm B \| Fm Ab Fm Gb~~ ×2	188	Fm ×4
177		189
178	[Гитарное соло]:	190	[Гитарное соло]:
179	Fm \| G \| Gb \| Fm ×2	191	Fm \| G \| F# \| Fm ×4
180	Cm* Am \| Ab* Dm7-5 \| Cm* Am \| Ab* Fm	192	Cm Am7-5 \| G# Dm7-5 /Gsus4/ \| Cm Am7-5 \| G# Fm
181	Cm* Am \| Ab* Dm7-5 \| Cm* Am \| Ab* G	193	Cm Am7-5 \| G# Dm7-5 /Gsus4/ \| Cm Am7-5 \| G# G
182		194
183	[Куплет]:	195	[Куплет]:
184	Cm Am	196	Cm Am7-5
185	I am responsible	197	I am responsible
186	Ab Dm7-5	198	G# Dm7-5
187	When anyone, anywhere	199	When anyone, anywhere
188	Cm Am	200	Gsus4 Cm Am7-5
189	Reaches out for help	201	Reaches out for help
190	Ab Fm	202	G# Fm
191	I want my hand to be there	203	I want my hand to be there
192	Cm Am	204	Cm Am7-5
193	I am responsible	205	I am responsible
194	Ab Dm7-5	206	G# Dm7-5
195	When anyone, anywhere	207	When anyone, anywhere
196	Cm Am	208	Cm Am7-5
197	Reaches out for help	209	Reaches out for help
198	Ab Fm	210	G# Fm
199	I want my hand to be there	211	I want my hand to be there
200	Db E	212	C# E
201	Whooa-oh-oh	213	Whooa-oh-oh
202	G Fdim7 Bm	214	G Fdim7 A
203	Whooa-whooa	215	Whooa-whooa
204		216

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