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Корректировка текста №10690
- 29 апреля
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Перенес слова ниже, сбоку не удобно читать в третьем куплете
| 32 | [Куплет]: | 32 | [Куплет]: |
|---|---|---|---|
| 33 | A | 33 | A |
| 34 | Hold onto a reason to stall but we've gone through all the phases | 34 | Hold onto a reason to stall but we've gone |
| 35 | F#m E выше пой | 35 | through all the phases |
| 36 | I hoped to open it all but you guard the only gate my enemy | 36 | F#m E |
| 37 | I hoped to open it all but you guard | ||
| 38 | the only gate my enemy | ||
| 37 | D F#m E | 39 | D F#m E |
| 38 | On the edge of leaving all we had for better days | 40 | On the edge of leaving all we had for better days |