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Корректировка текста №6407
- 30 июня 2024
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asavenko +20
Комментарий:
Убрал в четных строках в рефрене аккорд Bb, чтобы легче игралось и лучше звучало, в том числе в других тональностях, и добавил во второй строке бриджа аккорд Dm
| 19 | Dm C Bb | 19 | Dm C Bb |
|---|---|---|---|
| 20 | Face our fear along the way our freedom will prevail | 20 | Face our fear along the way our freedom will prevail |
| 21 | Dm | 21 | Dm C |
| 22 | Crown and the shining light | 22 | Crown and the shining light |
| 23 | Dm C Bb | 23 | Dm C Bb |
| 24 | Punishment and anger in the fire of your soul | 24 | Punishment and anger in the fire of your soul |
| 25 | Dm | 25 | Dm C |
| 26 | Prepare the eternal fight | 26 | Prepare the eternal fight |
| 27 | 27 | ||
| 29 | Eb F Dm Gm | 29 | Eb F Dm Gm |
| 30 | Lost in a dream in a boundless sea | 30 | Lost in a dream in a boundless sea |
| 31 | Eb F Gm | 31 | Eb F Dm Gm |
| 32 | Rivers of pain are guiding me | 32 | Rivers of pain are guiding me |
| 33 | Eb F Dm Gm | 33 | Eb F Dm Gm |
| 62 | Dm C Bb | 62 | Dm C Bb |
| 63 | Face our fear along the way our freedom will prevail | 63 | Face our fear along the way our freedom will prevail |
| 64 | Dm | 64 | Dm C |
| 65 | Crown and the shining light | 65 | Crown and the shining light |
| 66 | Dm C Bb | 66 | Dm C Bb |
| 67 | Punishment and anger in the fire of your soul | 67 | Punishment and anger in the fire of your soul |
| 68 | Dm | 68 | Dm C |
| 69 | Prepare the eternal fight | 69 | Prepare the eternal fight |
| 70 | 70 | ||
| 72 | Eb F Dm Gm | 72 | Eb F Dm Gm |
| 73 | Can you not feel the eternal pain? | 73 | Can you not feel the eternal pain? |
| 74 | Eb F Gm | 74 | Eb F Dm Gm |
| 75 | Flows through your heart and every vein | 75 | Flows through your heart and every vein |
| 76 | Eb F Dm Gm | 76 | Eb F Dm Gm |
| 102 | Lives! Forever onwards stare into the sun's | 102 | Lives! Forever onwards stare into the sun's |
| 103 | F Am G | 103 | F Am G |
| 104 | |||
| 105 | Where hopes and dreams are everlasting marching on and on | 104 | Where hopes and dreams are everlasting marching on and on |
| 106 | C G | 105 | C G |