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Корректировка текста №9545
- 31 августа 2025
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Каподастр на 3 ладу соответствует оригинальной тональности композиции
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| 1 | V | 1 | [Verse]: |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2 | Am Am C G | 2 | Am Am C G |
| 3 | Revere a million prayers and draw me into the holiness | 3 | Revere a million prayers and draw me into the holiness |
| 9 | Do you have no soul its like it died long ago | 9 | Do you have no soul its like it died long ago |
| 10 | 10 | ||
| 11 | C | 11 | [Chorus]: |
| 12 | F E7 Am G | 12 | F E7 Am G |
| 13 | Your lips feel warm to the touch, you can bring me back to life | 13 | Your lips feel warm to the touch, you can bring me back to life |
| 15 | On the outside you're ablaze and alive, but you're Dead Inside! | 15 | On the outside you're ablaze and alive, but you're Dead Inside! |
| 16 | 16 | ||
| 17 | SOLO: Am Am C G (x2) | 17 | [Solo]: |
| 18 | Am Am C G(x2) | ||
| 18 | 19 | ||
| 19 | V | 20 | [Verse]: |
| 20 | Am Am C G | 21 | Am Am C G |
| 21 | You're free to touch the sky whilst I Am crushed and pulverised | 22 | You're free to touch the sky whilst I Am crushed and pulverised |
| 27 | But now I've got nothing left you have no cares and I'm bereft | 28 | But now I've got nothing left you have no cares and I'm bereft |
| 28 | 29 | ||
| 29 | C | 30 | [Chorus]: |
| 30 | F E7 Am G | 31 | F E7 Am G |
| 31 | Your skin feels warm to caress I see magic in your eyes | 32 | Your skin feels warm to caress I see magic in your eyes |
| 33 | On the outside your ablaze and alive, but your dead inside! | 34 | On the outside your ablaze and alive, but your dead inside! |
| 34 | 35 | ||
| 35 | BREAK: Am F C G (x2) | 36 | [Break]: |
| 37 | Am F C G(x2) | ||
| 36 | 38 | ||
| 37 | B | 39 | [Bridge]: |
| 38 | Am F C G | 40 | Am F C G |
| 39 | Feel me now, hold me please, I need to see who Am I | 41 | Feel me now, hold me please, I need to see who Am I |
| 40 | Am F C G | 42 | Am F C G |
| 41 | Open up to me, stop hiding from me, its hurting babe, | 43 | Open up to me, stop hiding from me, its hurting babe, |
| 42 | only you can stop the pain | 44 | only you can stop the pain |
| 43 | Am F C G | 45 | Am F C G |
| 44 | Don't leave me out in the cold, don't leave me out to die | 46 | Don't leave me out in the cold, don't leave me out to die |
| 45 | Am F C G | 47 | Am F C G |
| 46 | I gave you everything, I can't give you anymore, | 48 | I gave you everything, I can't give you anymore, |
| 47 | now I've become just like you | 49 | now I've become just like you |
| 48 | 50 | ||
| 49 | C | 51 | [Chorus]: |
| 50 | F E7 Am G | 52 | F E7 Am G |
| 51 | My lips feel warm to the touch but my words seem so alive | 53 | My lips feel warm to the touch but my words seem so alive |